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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Okay first off, this is amazing! You have improved a lot since the last time I critiqued you.
I can't really say much about the coloring since I don't know how to do any of this stuff and probably should learn one of these days.
So i guess I'll cover facial anatomy.
This is a little hard to explain without a model (I wish we had muro in comments) but i think the ears are a little too high. The eyes match up with the face at the correct angle but they are a little too high due to the placement. Ears a a little above the where the jaw meets the face (does that even make sense?
The nose is a bit too small, It seems to just be coming from the middle of the face without the basis of above the eye sockets and down. I see you emphasized that a bit but i would recommend it a bit more. Such as darkening the areas above the eyes a bit more. Finally possibly add a shine or highlight to the nose.
Sorry if this doesn't make any sense, I'm not good at explaining.....stuff.
Anyways, keep improving!
Thanks you!
I'll make sure do all this fantastical stuff next time.
And it does suck that da doesnt allow muro in comments would make it alot easier to critique anatomy and stuff.
Thank you again!
I really need to stop typing after doing Exam-study-seshes
*but i think the ears are a little too high. The eyes match up with the face at the correct angle because their height matches with the tips of the ears, which is roughly eye-placement. However they are a little too high due to the placement of the ears. Ears are placed so they start a little above the where the jaw meets the face.
maybe that is a bit clearer